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I'm Wrung Out Like a Sponge

4/2/2015

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That's what I said today to my copy editor when he told me he had some more 'edits' for me. To be honest - these words are not original. I am quoting a colleague of mine and what she told me yesterday while we were talking about her work to obtain her PhD, or is it her doctorate of education? Who knows? Who cares? The point is, at some point, you have given it your all, you can't give anymore. As she told me, "there is not a drop of moisture left in the sponge to give."

That's how I feel after listening to my beta readers' (thank you betas!) comments and taking them all into account as I went through one more round of edits and revisions to make sure EVERYTHING was clear to the reader.

But I am not a miracle worker. I am a story teller. And I think I have done my best telling this one. So maybe there are a few missing commas, or the POV changes (although only two out of seven people seemed to care). And maybe I don't add enough drama or a devious murder, as my son suggested I do, or the death scenes are not emotional enough for everyone (spoiler alert there is death in my story). I can only do so much.

But with each change I make another typo or mistake - such as using the word remiss to mean something that it doesn't (thanks to my copy editor for catching that one).

What should I care about now, really? Did I nail the characters? Hopefully. Is the beautiful scenery of the Adirondack mountains well-portrayed? I think so. Did I maintain historical accuracy when possible? Yes, for sure.

As one of my betas told me when I lamented to him about having to go back and make everything perfect:

"It's time to put the paint brushes down and stop daubing away.  The readers may have valid points and their suggestions actually could improve the final product....Be less attentive to outside comments and follow your own muse."


Thank you Harvey.

It's coming.... May 31st, as I reminded my copy-editor today.
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3/1/2015

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PictureCover art: Brendan Cox Design Studio
I have my cover art complete. I am thinking about how to market the book when it comes out. My PR person at Highland Words is developing taglines and book blurbs and pitch letters for reviewers. So now what do I do? I wait for my beta-readers to finish reading and try not to bother them about it.

For those that do not know what a beta-reader is I'll give you the wikipedia version: a non-professional reader who critiques your work. I gave them all specific instructions: no need to edit unless you see something glaring, just tell me what parts are too slow and what characters don't work. I have some random people reading it. A few men I know that love the Adirondacks and the history, a woman I met at a conference who shared my love of reading and I tracked down on Linkedin to ask her to read for me; a person that follows me on Facebook although I am not even sure how I know her; a former journalist and his wife who I used to babysit for and I haven't seen since I got married 26 years ago; an architect; and an avid reader of Jane Austen because on of my betas keeps telling me I should be writing like her. (I think Jane Austen is boring).

So far I've received some good feedback. The cover design for example went through a couple of revisions. And I cut 1,000 words from the first few chapters.

My biggest problem is trying not to pester people about it. I read 2-3 books a month. So of course I can't understand how someone I gave the book to over three weeks ago hasn't finished it yet. Or have they and they are afraid ot tell me what they think? Is it that bad?

The other problem I am having is not going back to the book and editing. I keep wanting to read it over again myself and edit even though I promised myself I wouldn't touch it until late March. And god-forbid if I get started on the next book in the trilogy. I can't even think about starting the next until I have this one wrapped up.

So what have I been doing with myself? Well the picture below tells you some of it. I went out for a ski on the lake yesterday with my daughter. And enjoyed the sunshine. But not as much as the two ladies that had set up beach chairs and a cooler of beer and were sunning themselves in 20 degree F.


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